Week 12 100 word challenge

One day two men named Alex and John went to a pub at the same time. Alex and John are not friends, they used to be, but John robbed Alex’s house. Alex always goes to the pub. When Alex seen John come in he thought to do payback. John order his then went to the toilet so Alex poisoned Johns drink with rat poison that he has in is pocket because he had to kill the rats in has room. John drunk his drink and he felt really ill. Alex was very happy that John had payback from robbing him.  

3 thoughts on “Week 12 100 word challenge”

  1. Flynn,
    I was looking forward to hearing a tale of two friends reuniting after a feud, but soon found the story-teller had a different bend in mind. How sad that the characters could not find a better way to handle their troubles.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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